tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6496946880041109139.post6468688566776982276..comments2023-03-26T00:59:08.297-07:00Comments on Mevolent Collaboration: Zafira Kerias: Battle of Long PondBlogland Collaborationhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02779379541425386377noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6496946880041109139.post-48035011903523404022013-02-27T13:12:39.687-08:002013-02-27T13:12:39.687-08:00Great chapter, Zaf! I can really see an improvemen...Great chapter, Zaf! I can really see an improvement in your fight scenes just as well as the rest of your chapters. I don't even know how you manage it, but I swear each chapter is infinitely better than the last! Great job, and keep improving!Alastair Cruciatushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07879674345079233347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6496946880041109139.post-71238547756586763722013-02-27T13:10:50.500-08:002013-02-27T13:10:50.500-08:00Well then I guess this would be a great time to me...Well then I guess this would be a great time to mention that _____________ is going to die for sure, and ____________ and _____________ might die as well. I'm not so sure about _____________ either, but who knows? He/she/it might get lucky. (it's not likely)Alastair Cruciatushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07879674345079233347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6496946880041109139.post-38118923247471196102013-02-25T23:33:53.459-08:002013-02-25T23:33:53.459-08:00You misaimed! HA you aimed PERFECTALY!!!!
GOD I c...You misaimed! HA you aimed PERFECTALY!!!!<br /><br />GOD I cracked up at that part! <br /><br />OH GOD he's not going to be happy with you next time he see's you!!!<br /><br />:D Great shot Zaf! couldn't of done it better myself!!! ;D<br /><br />Great chapter Zaf and i'm glad Javier's ok!Mistical Futurehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02886124450418948632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6496946880041109139.post-30972146971231599422013-02-24T18:48:29.654-08:002013-02-24T18:48:29.654-08:00I like how it's set at an actual mortal event....I like how it's set at an actual mortal event.<br />[Sighs in relief] I was worried about Javier for a second. If one more character dies, I'm going to go insane and kill the rest of you myself. I think FabiTC might go insane as well. We shall see.<br /><br />Oh, and congrats on injuring Serpine! I know it's not as important as the actual leader, but he <i>is</i> a general. You should celebrate, get yourself a nice doughnut or something... Oh, right. There's a war. [Sarcastically] I'd forgotten.<br /><br />I really should have used Aemilia for this story... [laughs] But I can't bring her in now, for approximately three reasons!<br /><br />Ok, now I'm definitely on a random tangent totally unrelated to your awesome chapter. I'm stopping now.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com